Kia ora Merepeka I liked how there were lots of pictures. This reminded me when I wrote stories. I want to know why the king and queen gave the girl five pieces of chocolate.
Hi Merepeka. I loved how you made a story about the toy story girl. Really good I liked how the toy story girl was brave. Next time you might want to put some songs to the story.
Hi Merepeka It’s me Sadie I like that you said that they were watching tv and youtube. This reminded me when I roasted marshmallows with my auntie at her old house. I think you should take slide nine out because it has a black screen.
Kia ora Merepeka. I love the way you said she ate 5 pieces of chocolate. That brought me back to when I watched the gingerbread man because the gingerbread says I am not Not scared on the gingerbread man. Maybe next time you could say what are watching.
Kia ora Merepeka I liked the way you made them eat out of the fire. Your story remind me of the giga bred man . Maybe next time you could put background.
Kia ora Merepeka. I enjoyed the part when they roasted marshmallows. This reminded me of when I roasted marshmallows. Maybe next time you can put music to it.from Athena.
Kia ora Merepeka
ReplyDeleteI liked how there were lots of pictures.
This reminded me when I wrote stories.
I want to know why the king and queen gave the girl five pieces of chocolate.
Hi Merepeka.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you made a story about the toy story girl.
Really good I liked how the toy story girl was brave.
Next time you might want to put some songs to the story.
Hi Merepeka It’s me Sadie
ReplyDeleteI like that you said that they were watching tv and youtube.
This reminded me when I roasted marshmallows with my auntie at her old house.
I think you should take slide nine out because it has a black screen.
Kia ora Merepeka.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you said she ate 5 pieces of chocolate.
That brought me back to when I watched the gingerbread man because the gingerbread says I am not Not scared on the gingerbread man.
Maybe next time you could say what are watching.
Kia ora Merepeka
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you made them eat out of the fire.
Your story remind me of the giga bred man .
Maybe next time you could put background.
Hi Merepeka.
ReplyDeleteI liked haoew the girl said I'm not scared.
Maybe next time you could say what they're watching.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Merepeka.
I enjoyed the part when they roasted marshmallows.
This reminded me of when I roasted marshmallows.
Maybe next time you can put music to it.from Athena.