This week we have been learning how to create comic strips on Make Belief Comix. Here we are totally engrossed in writing comics about the importance of washing your hands.
Here are a couple of Comic Strips by Ben and Geminious. What do you think?
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ReplyDeleteDaer Team Rima
ReplyDeletei liked how you did every thing good job
FRom Rm3 satmarys
hi team Rima
ReplyDeleteI liked how you had a theme and stuck to it .
emma
Hi Ben.
ReplyDeleteI really like your comic strip.
I really liked the way you used some onomatopoeia, .
Next time maybe don't use three characters.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Geminious.
I liked how you asked if you could do it now.
It reminded me about the time I did mine.
Maybe next time you can try not to space bar before a full stop.
ReplyDeleteHi Geminous.
My favourite part was when you did a police officer and had the book in her hand.
Next time you could do smaller boxes
I like the way you did capitals.